The highlight of NTR visual novels, is generally either well written dialogue and good art, or a quality choice system. The former is always appreciated, but the latter is what would have saved this game. The art is admittedly not the best, and the dialogue leaves something to be desired. Kevin is just your average over the top evil scientist with bland dialogue and the twist with Kara honestly just didn't really make much sense given how long Mike has known her. Had it been designed that Mike was actually obsessed with Kara and not just in love, then maybe Mike not realizing the twist could have worked. As it currently stands, Mike not realizing what Kara is actually like doesn't really make a ton of sense and feels kind of last minute. Given how far Kara's research has gotten , her sleeping her way through college and to get funding makes little sense, as she is clearly capable. Also, the transition from when Kara is being submissive, same day she got the dog bowl, to how she acts after the full transformation feels too abrupt. I understand that supposedly two days had passed but it feels like such a drastic change, like I had gone from reading a slow burn romance/cuckmance to reading some fairly poorly written smut. If there had at least been choice or two to allow Mike to be more dominant, maybe even turn the tables or change the story in some way I could appreciate it more. But as it currently stands, the game has mediocre art compared to others with similar premises, mediocre dialogue compared to most NTR visual novels if I'm being honest, and a story that's more depressing then hot, with a mostly meaningless decision at the end. Would have been 1/5 if not for the fact that the base dialogue sprites (not CG/sex scene sprites) of Kara as a canine hybrid looked fairly hot.
Version: Final
Version Thread Update Date: 2024-07-22
Written On: June 23rd 2024 at 2:40 AM
